Mormegil
Nov 9 2008, 07:54 AM
the white light of hope
shone through the darkness
yearning as it spoke
gave in to weakness
falling as it broke
fell into madness
Feern
Nov 9 2008, 10:25 AM
Sounds fine to me. I mean there really isn't any bad poetry.
Mormegil
Nov 9 2008, 10:32 AM
I'll creatively interpret fine as damn good >_<
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